Friday, 9 December 2011

Feedback Tutorial with exhibition for Mona

Loneliness/isolation
Dreamlike
Depressing sound - works with her being alone
Cant work out tricks but obvious that there is some form of manipulation
Psychological about being nowhere
Hallucination
Negative spaces - nothing
Spaces between places
About 2 people - wrong as we only want to use one.
Journey about going somewhere, even with the hanging and mirror one
Never get anywhere
Sleeping and corridor don't work as well, sleeping doesnt work and the corridor needs to be different, not appear from a door.
Has a begining point - mistake, try Acorns on Bennetts hill for a corridor. Hotel.
Coming out of tunnel, positive one, can't pinpoint where she has come from.
Artist - french woman walks the street at night and is filmed, psycho geography.
Mundane setting but something surreal happens
Use depth more, make her further away perhaps make the viewer stand further away
Placed as 4th person
Niggling sound, boring a hole in head have to focus as its so subtle
Morse code, digital
Messing with head.


Plinths should have been painted
Wires hidden
Flat screens make more alienated
Only one place to stand, manipulated

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